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V-Prologue by ~LockedInsideMyHead00:iconLockedInsideMyHead00:

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Prologue

There is no telling of what I am about to say.  What you do know is that I will say something that will have your eyes glued to the pages of this book.  The question is: What?

Our story begins at exactly midnight on January 1, 2056.  At that time a child is born, a child that will soon see the end of the world as she knows it.  The child of whom I speak of is a girl born with dark hypnotizing eyes and even darker, silkier hair.  To the world around her she is an outcast, for at that time everyone’s hair was either brown or blond and their eyes are a strange shade of blue or green.  Her name was Morrisa, meaning The Dark One.  As time went by she learned that she had gifts that she had to keep to herself.  These are her stories.
©2008-2009 ~LockedInsideMyHead00
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prologue to my book
enjoy:)
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~Xardan:iconXardan: May 17, 2008, 2:16:12 PM
An interesting start to a story (and prologue). To be honest, I was expecting much less, but I found it to be quite an interesting few lines, and I would be interested to read further. There is little I can say about 8 lines, and since it says only devious thoughts I won't write loads. The description is good and I like the idea, I would have to read the other chapters to make better judgment of the story as a whole.
~LockedInsideMyHead00:iconLockedInsideMyHead00: May 17, 2008, 3:11:33 PM
thank you, ive been stuck for a while now, but im glad u enjoyed it :)
ive posted ch. 2 and startedd on 3
u can tell me ur thoughts on it
i dont mind
i need the critisim so that i might write better in the long run
:)
toddles

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I stand here locked inside my head, remembering everything you said. The silence gets us no where, gets us no where, way to fast.
~Chelsmee:iconChelsmee: May 17, 2008, 6:11:46 PM
Hmm, that is weird!
I've been writing my Dearest Vampire since last summer, I didn't know someone else out there had a Dearest Vampire story too!

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~LockedInsideMyHead00:iconLockedInsideMyHead00: May 17, 2008, 7:28:00 PM
yea, ive been writing since july or august, idk
i really like ur story
i cant wait for the next one :)
why did alice get mained?
oh well, i guess it had to happen, check mine out its pretty good for the first 2 chapters :)
i think tell me what u think:)

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I stand here locked inside my head, remembering everything you said. The silence gets us no where, gets us no where, way to fast.
~Xardan:iconXardan: May 18, 2008, 2:26:30 AM
I will take a look at the other pieces of writing.
~LockedInsideMyHead00:iconLockedInsideMyHead00: May 18, 2008, 8:46:36 AM
thank you, please enjoy :)

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I stand here locked inside my head, remembering everything you said. The silence gets us no where, gets us no where, way to fast.
~Edward101lover:iconEdward101lover: Jun 21, 2008, 9:41:18 PM
sounds interesting !!
i think i'll read the story

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i hope that you can see me ,
not for what i am.
but for what i could be ,
if here you stand.
~LockedInsideMyHead00:iconLockedInsideMyHead00: Jun 22, 2008, 3:23:46 PM
thx ^_^ hope u enjoy

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Saw this on someone elses sign and loved it, it is not my idea
~upon a midnight rise, i feel like i am alone. with out you here by my side, i am nothing. doomed to this damn place that i am to remain, i wait for the fire to warm my heart... my Pyro~
~Edward101lover:iconEdward101lover: Jun 22, 2008, 3:47:49 PM
you're welcome!!
im going to try to read it this week

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i hope that you can see me ,
not for what i am.
but for what i could be ,
if here you stand.
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